托福作文语法问题：别让你的一流论证沦落二流分数_托福英语写作

　　托福写作强调逻辑和论证，以整体来评分。但有些同学在平常学习中单单注意逻辑和论证，往往忽视了语言方面的雕琢，考场上在语言方面疏漏多多，那样即便你的思路和论证属于一流，最多也只能得个二流分数。小编为您整理托福写作中的七个语法错误，希望大家能规避这些错误。

　　1. 用词不当

　　原：The absence of groupwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society.

　　改：The absence of teamwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society.

　　评：groupwork是分组或者小组集体任务的意思。这位同学原本想说teamwork团队合作，却用了一个看起来很像，但实际完全不同的词，表达出来的意思就风马牛不相及了。

　　原：You will be dangerous if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture.

　　改：You will be in danger if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture.

　　评：dangerous表示所修饰的对象是带来危险的，有危险性的，而be in danger才是身处险境的意思。到底谁才是威胁呢?

　　原：Firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might effect their further development.

　　改：Firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might affect their further development.

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