Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.
We hope we can have more activities of this kind!
【亮点说明】
范文注意使用First, Then, Finally等来衔接句子和段落,表示事情发生的时间顺序,使作文更有条理,做到了行文连贯。
全文适用的是一般过去时,注意了文章上下文时态保持一致的原则。
范文使用了一些重要的语法知识:非谓语动词Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.;定语从句we put the figurines we made on the table…;时间状语从句When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. 语法知识使用得当,叙事清晰。
【考点定位】图表类记叙文
1.【2015·安徽】
某英文杂志正在举办以"Fancy yourself as an interviewer"为主题的征文活动,请你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview" 为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容包括:
1. 采访的对象;
2. 采访的原因;
3. 想提的问题。
注意:
1. 词数120左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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