食这些食物,才能帮助野生动物摆脱灭绝的危险。
Just as Peter said in his blog, Chinese food is rich and tasty. When he was traveling in China. he enjoyed all kinds of dishes, all of which were very delicious .However, he also found that many small animals, even the precious and rare ones in the world, appear in the Chinese dishes. But in fact. our government has taken measures to prevent people from doing so.
It's not right to eat such animals either in China or in any other country in the world. As friends of our human beings, animals help to keep the balance of nature. If we go on killing animals like this, the world will not be fit for us to live in in the future. Therefbre, all people, including travelers from all over the world should not order such dishes. Only in this way can we protect the wildlife and help the animals out of the danger of dying out.
appear改为appeared,因为此处缺宾语从句的谓语动词appeared,但不能使用动词原形。
3.画龙点睛:1)第一段的第二每作为回应博客内容,提出话题的引子,最好将人称改为第二人称,更容易增加内容;的亲和力,拉近与读者的距离。如 :While travelin in China,you can enioy all kinds of dishes , all of which were very delicious。2)文章的末段提出个人观点,段首用in my opinion作为过渡就更好了。
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