Ladies and gentlemen,
As we all know, trees are of vital importance for us. Not only do they absorb carbon dioxide to produce oxygen which is essential to the health of human beings, but also they can make our city beautiful. Furthermore, the climate can even be changed by planting trees.
However, to our disappointment, in spite of the fact that a great number of trees are planted in spring and autumn every year, few trees planted by green hands survive. Therefore, our government is appealing to every resident to donate twenty-five yuan to buy the young trees and support for each tree. 25 yuan, which is a small sum of money for you, makes a difference for a tree.
As far as I’m concerned, this is a good chance to make contributes to our city. At the same time, we can enjoy a greener and clearer environment. Why not join in our campaign?
【教师点评】
该文章讲述了树木对人类的重要性、捐资种树的必要性,使作者的倡议有理有据,更具有说服力。该文过渡自然,使用了多个过渡词(加粗),短语(下划线)及句型(斜体)也运动的很恰当。语气委婉,句意连贯,层次分明使得该文又有较强的可读性,能吸引读者。
【句型拓展】
类似的常用句型有:
1. If all those trees had survived, the city would have become a garden
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