2. 第一段第5句:licence意为"执照",不是"牌照",故the taxi's licence可改为the number of the taxi。
3. 第二段第2句:表示度量单位的centimetre为可数名词,应把三个 centimetre都改为centimetres。
4. 第二段第3句:In it过于简短,不必在其后停顿,其后逗号应去掉。
5. 第二段第3句:shirt是可数名词, three pieces of shirts表达不正确,应改为three shirts。
6. 第二段第4句:表示价值时,通常用介词for,故of最好改为for。
7.第三段第1句:make relation with me表达不正确。习作者想表达"与我取得联系",可改为get in touch with me或return the suitcase to me。
My name is Wang Fang. I arrived at the airport at 11 am. Then I took a yellow taxi to the Holiday Inn with five pieces of luggage. When I arrived at the Holiday Inn, I found my suitcase had been left in the taxi because of my carelessness. Unfortunately, I didn't notice the number of the taxi.
The suitcase is black and made of plastic. It is about 60 centimetres by 40 centimetres by 16 centimetres. In it there is a camera, two pairs of trousers, three shirts, several books for children and a purse. In the purse, there is a check for 2,000 dollars.
Could the finder get in touch with me? My telephone number is 0435-3940526.
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