2016年高考总复习优化英语课件（四川专用）写作教程：Module8_高考复习指南

2016年高考总复习优化英语课件（四川专用）写作教程：Module8

　　my dad persuaded me to go into law.And I’ve always regretted it.I wanted to be an archeologist, but I didn’t pursue my dream.” As it turned out, little publication went to become Student, a national magazine for young people in the U．K..My wife and I have two children, and I’d like to think we are bringing them up in the same way Dad raised me. 用自己的话把主题和主要情节组织成摘要. ?写作模板 The passage tells us that the author’s father has a special way of teaching his children.He always praises them for their progress and explained to them what is good and encouraged them to be persistent.Because of this, the author became successful. ?名师指津 1.常用词汇: tell, describe, draw a conclusion, see,arouse our thinking, at last, finally, in the end, after many adventures, eventually... 2.句型归纳: 1)The passage tells us (a story) that... 2)We can draw a conclusion from the passage that... 3)After many adventures, the two boys returned to their home successfully. ?文体讲解 Summary基本格式 1.对于“故事型”的summary,只需把故事的核心主人公(核心主人公做过的最核心的事件与该故事的作者想要说明的道理包括在summary其中就可以了).换言之, “故事型”的summary必须具备三个要素,即:主人公,核心事件,故事的教训. 2.对于另一类题材——议论文的summary,此类summary的写法与“故事型”的summary有所不同.议论文的summary中必须具备三要素,分别是“论题”(如 “Should troublesome students be suspended”)、“论点,一般议论文至少有双方论点,甚至是多方论点” (如The headmaster believes that suspending troublesome students is beneficial for school and other students)与“持这种论点的论据”.若议论文的summary中不具备“论题”、“论点”与“论据”这三要素,则被认为不完整. LANGUAGE FUNCTION·语言功能 1.通常 summary 的开头都有一些常用的句子,学生可以在平时的训练中学习使用.如:From the passage above, we know...The passage is mainly about...After reading the passage, I/we know...The author told us...但这些开头也只限于要求以读者的身份来概括时使用.如果要求作者以当事人的身份来概括,那用上面这些表达则是不正确的.所以我们要审清题目,随机应变. 2.用最简练的文字把文章的主要内容概括出即可,无须把一些细节,琐碎的内容加上,如描述、举例、一些具体事实等. 3.避免重复.在原文中,为了强调某个主题,可能会重复论证说明.但是这在摘要中是不能使用的.应该删除那些突出强调的重复句. 4.压缩长的句子. 如下面两例: “His courage in battle might without exaggeration be called lion-like.” 可以概括为:“He was very brave in battle.” “He was hard up for money and was being pressed by his creditor.” 可以概括为:“He was in financial difficulties.” (1)使用词组代替整句或者从句. 如:“Beautiful mountains like Mount Tai, Lushan Mountain, and Mount Huang, were visited by only a few people in the past.Today, better wages, holidays with pay, new hotels on these mountains, and better train and bus services, have brought them within reach of many who never thought of visiting them ten years ago.” 可以概括为:“Beautiful mountains like Mount Tai, once visited by only a few people, are today accessible to many, thanks to better wages, paid holidays, new hotels and better transportation services.”