2016届高三英语二轮随堂训练课件：专题6 书面表达 6.3_高考复习指南

2016届高三英语二轮随堂训练课件：专题6 书面表达 6.3

　　第3讲问题观点类【典例】(2015·浙江高考)

　　在班级活动中, 当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时, 你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人, 还是尊重大多数同学的意见? 请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题, 用英文写一篇短文。要求如下:

　　1. 从以上两种做法中选择一种;

　　2. 以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。 When I Have a Different Opinion ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【解题思路】第一步: 依体裁谋篇章　结构对　第一关内容观点不一致时怎么办段落第一段描述观点并提出自己的观点; 第二段阐述观点理由; 第三段进一步阐述自己的观点, 做到首尾呼应第二步: 列要点选句式　要点全　及格线要点一: 观点不一致时我的做法______________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _________ 要点二: 叙述具体事例支持论点___________________________________ _________ 要点三: 再次阐述自己的观点_________________________________ _______________ We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it. Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. It is my opinion that good opinions are worth sticking to. 第三步: 扣主题拓展句　句式美　优秀分要点一拓展: 添加选择坚持观点的理由 ____________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it. By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly. 要点二拓展: 添加讨论的过程、结果 ________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 要点三拓展: 添加选择坚持观点的理由 _______________________________________________________________ ____________ Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates preferred to go to a park while I created an idea of going to a nicer place. I managed to persuade my classmates to accept my idea. It is my opinion that good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all. 【现场阅卷·作文升格】学　生　答　卷我　来　阅　卷该生习作为三档作文, 得分为15分。虽漏掉一些内容, 但覆盖所有主要内容; 原文词数略少, 只有90词; 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误; 描述过去的事情时, 一定要用过去时; 句子结构相对简单。 1. 第一句has应改为have, 此处主语是people, 谓语动词应用复数形式。 2. 第二句insist应改为insist on, insist on意为“坚持”。 3. 第三句truth应改为true, 此处为表语, 故用形容词形式较好。 4. 第四、五、六和七句, 把相应的动词都改为过去式。 5. 第四句have应改为was, there be. . . 是固定句型。 6. 第六句think后添加what, 此句为复合句, think后为宾语从句, 且从句中又含一个主语从句, do后缺宾语, 故用what连接。五　档　作　文 When I Have a Different Opinion