(2) 第二段对原因的叙述虽然满足了提纲要求,但是原因陈述过于单薄,逻辑性也不强,没有说服力。

　　成稿:

　　In the past five years there have been many changes in people’s diets. People eat fewer grains, fruits and vegetables, and more milk and meat today than in the past.

　　There are mainly two reasons for these changes. Firstly, with the development of the economy people have more money to buy meat and milk, which they couldn抰 afford in the past. Secondly, with more and more people realizing that diet is very important to their health, they have begun to consume more things surch as milk and meat.

　　Milk and meat are important, but they aren抰 the only things people should eat. People should eat a balanced diet and try to consume different kinds of foods, especially grains, fruits and vegetables. Powerfulsentences:1. Fewer grains,r fruits and vegetables are being consumed, while more milk and meat are being consumed today than in the past.2. A balanced diet is one that includes all the food groups. In other words, we should eat every kind of food every day. 3. Everyone wants to know how much they should eat to stay healthy. It抯 a tricky question, though. It depends on your age, whether you抮e a girl or a boy, and how active you are.

　　th巩固练习:

　　假设你在浏览一个美国中学生Paul的博客。他将自己一周的晚餐食谱贴在博客里,请根据他的食谱发一个帖子发表你的看法。(词数120-150)

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