Furthermore, the career planning should be taken into account in the school English Post . On the one hand, it covers one’s career development a great deal .On the other hand, it makes a great difference to one’s career success in the future.

　　What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas. Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Post.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Cheng Fei

　　【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组，如：share with 和…分享，Needless to say不必说， according to 根据， have positive effects on对…有积极的影响，in turn反之，take… into account将…考虑在内，make a great difference to对…有很大的影响，in the hope that希望，句式上体现出多变的特点，如：Compared to the entertainment ,I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important . 这句话用了过去分词和同位语从句，The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life. 这句话用了表语从句和while表示对比的用法， the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one’s horizons, which in turn is beneficial to one’s study and the establishment of philosophy of life.这句话使用了非限制性定语从句， What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas. 这句话用了主语从句，还有范文还使用了 In addition, Furthermore, On the one hand, On the other hand,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。

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