小鸡不仅吃食有趣,而且对我也很有帮助。那是星期五早上,我睡得正香,忽然觉得脑门上冰凉凉的,还有点儿疼。我睁开眼睛一看,原来是小白正用嘴啄我的脑门呢!其余的小鸡围成一圈儿,“唧唧唧”地叫着,好像在说:“小主人,快起来!快起来!”我赶紧爬了起来。
The chickens are not only interesting to eat, but also helpful to me. It was Friday morning. I was sleeping soundly. Suddenly, I felt cold on my forehead. It hurt a little. I opened my eyes and saw that Xiaobai was pecking at my forehead with his mouth! The rest of the chickens were in a circle, chirping as if to say, "get up, little master! Get up! " I got up quickly.
你们说,这群小鸡有意思不?
Do you think these chickens are interesting?
点评:本文以孩子的眼光,围绕“有意思”描写了一群小鸡。跑起来像绒球,吃起东西来很有意思,早上叫我起床也很有意思。小鸡争食的一段写的尤其生动,“叨、跑、抢、紧追、绕、拖、奔、衔、乍着翅膀,使劲地拽着”,一连串的动作描写准确形象,把小鸡的可爱表现得淋漓尽致。
Comments: from the perspective of children, this paper describes a group of chickens around "interesting". It's fun to run like a pile ball, eat, and wake me up in the morning. The passage of chicken fighting for food is particularly vivid, "saying, running, grabbing, chasing, circling, dragging, running, biting, gripping the wings, and tugging hard". A series of movements describe the exact image, and show the cute chicken incisively and vividly.
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