中考作文“雷人”阅卷老师惊诧_初中英语作文

中考作文“雷人”阅卷老师惊诧

“其实，我们并不完全排斥有关爱情主题的文章，但该学生所写的内容让人哭笑不得。”参与中考阅卷的温二十一中语文教师陈梦龙老师说，这篇作文在语言文字上缺乏美感，在主题思想上没有良好的立意，对换女朋友一事表达的是一种炫耀的情绪，着实让人惊诧，该考生的语文素养和综合素养有待提高。

"In fact, we don't completely exclude articles about love, but what the student wrote is very sad." Chen Menglong, a Chinese teacher at Wen's No.21 middle school who took part in the examination, said that the composition lacked aesthetic feeling in language and words, had no good idea in the theme, and expressed a show off mood in the event of changing girlfriend, which really surprised people. The language cultivation and comprehensive quality of the examinee need to be improved.

另一名考生的作文讲述了去养鸭场偷鸭蛋的事，文末有这样一段话：“我们三个人就向(像)狼一样的，见蛋就拿，最后手放不下了，口袋放不下了，我们三个人高兴回家了。从那一刻开始，我就有一点想摘点过来，偷点过来啊。”

Another examinee's composition tells about stealing duck eggs from a duck farm. At the end of the article, there is a saying: "the three of us are like wolves. We take the eggs when we see them. At last, we can't put our hands and pockets. The three of us are happy to go home. From that moment on, I wanted to pick some and steal some. "