大干世界,多姿多彩;人间生活,关爱灿烂。在我们的生活中,有这样一个真实的故事。(文笔简洁,点扣题眼。)
The world is full of diversity; human life is full of care. In our life, there is such a true story. (the writing is simple and the point is close to the topic.)
一个严冬的早晨。在一个偏僻的小巷里,却有许多人围在一起看着什么,忽然一个中年男子挤进了人群,("挤"写出人多,同时也突出"他"想看个究竟的急切心情。)他发现冰冷的地上竟蜷着一个哇哇直叫的女婴。这是一个被抛弃的孩子,他顾不得一些人的议论,毅然决然地把女婴拖了回家。("蜷"字用得准确形象。"顾不得"写出心情急切,"毅然决然"描绘出态度果断之势。)
A cold winter morning. In a remote alley, there are many people around looking at something. Suddenly, a middle-aged man crowded into the crowd. )He found a screaming baby girl curled up on the cold ground. This is a abandoned child. He ignored some people's comments and resolutely dragged the baby girl home. (& quot; curl up & quot; words are used accurately. &Quote; can't help but write about being in a hurry, and describe a decisive attitude. )
这位中年男子便是本地的一位菜农。他家的经济并不富裕,一家人靠卖菜为生。他的妻子见丈夫抱着婴儿回来时,先是吃了一惊,当她听完丈夫的叙说后,便同意收养这可怜的孩子。夫妻俩商量了一下,给孩子取名为"龙女"。从此,龙女幸福地与父母生活在一起。可好景不长,好的名字并没给她带来幸福的命运,就在龙女11岁那年,一次她在放学的路上突然昏倒。龙女的父母得知后,迅速将其送进了医院。(插叙身份、家境,为下文替龙女治病蓄势。"吃了一惊"既写情态,又写心理。叙述故事,反映生活中的"亮点"--收养弃婴。)
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