Candidates will "start with emotion" on the level of life thinking, on the height of life thinking. Life, because it contains moving, will show its gorgeous, noble and strong; life, because with moving, will find the direction, stride forward, full of happiness and hope. From this point of view, the candidates' rational thinking is meticulous and profound. The selection of materials in this paper highlights two characteristics: the teaching materials of selection, such as Tao Yuanming's "nature based love hill", Sima Qian's "historian's masterpiece", Shi Tiesheng's "view of life", Su Wu's "shepherd in Ze" and Wang Zhaojun's "leaving the tomb alone to dusk", which are rich and profound; the presentation of materials in a parallel way avoids the stereotype of spreading, which increases the content Capacity strengthens the strength of verification. (Liu Dehai)

本文给出的启示是，写作素材不是匮乏，而是缺乏“发现”的意识，我们学过的教材，我们触摸的社会……主体自我发现的素材更能融情入文。(刘德海)

The Enlightenment of this paper is that the writing materials are not deficient, but lack of the consciousness of "discovery", the teaching materials we have learned, the society we touch The material of self discovery of the subject can integrate emotion into the text. (Liu Dehai)

现在是25世纪，我独自一个人坐在房里发呆。窗外一片喧嚣，美丽的天空早已失去了它本来的颜色，人们的神色麻木，行色匆匆，使我心里觉得涩涩的。飞快的城市化节奏让每个人都气喘吁吁，觉得我们应该出发，寻找些什么。

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