Comments: from small to large is the characteristics of this article. What's rare is that the author pushes his personal experience to a wider extent, thinks of the successful experience of famous people and great people, and realizes that details make great people. Because grandpa's words and deeds are combined with the typical life details of celebrities and great people, abstract reasoning is avoided. The language has its own characteristics, and the fluency also shows its brilliance.
作文四:举手投足之间
Composition 4: between hands and feet
生命的车轮缓缓向前推进,人类也已从年幼懵懂的种群成长为拥有高度文明与智慧的生物。知识与责任让我们渐渐摆脱了以自我为中心的狭隘,我们越来越多地考虑善待自然。而我想说,善待自然,就请从举手投足之间做起。
The wheel of life is slowly moving forward, and human beings have grown from young and ignorant populations to creatures with high civilization and wisdom. Knowledge and responsibility let us gradually get rid of the narrow self-centered, and more and more we think about treating nature well. And I want to say, be kind to nature, please start from every move.
这个世界有很多环保主义者。他们可以举行声势浩大的游行示威来抗议日本人对鲸的残酷杀戮,他们也可以建造奇特而坚固的木屋过树上生活来反对商人们对森林的砍伐。有时候,我们不由觉得那样的勇气与壮举离我们太遥远。没有错。但爱与善待并不总是要用惊天动地的牺牲来表达。在举手投足之间,我们就可以表现出对自然的善待。
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