8年湖北部分高考满分作文赏析_高中英语作文

8年湖北部分高考满分作文赏析

这世间温润如玉的谦谦君子们哦，纵然那一举手、一投足间光辉如萤如豆，交融汇聚成光的海洋，也该有贯日白虹、骀荡春风。

The world's gentle and modest people are like jade. Even if the hands and feet are shining like peas and mingled into a sea of light, there should be a spring breeze running through the sun and the rainbow.

点评：本文特点是，在写法上用第二人称方式娓娓而谈，写得从容、亲切。文章对“君子”内涵把握准确，特别强调谦卑、慎独、修德、温润如玉，显示出作者具有一定的文化修养。文章反复强调弯腰者形象，这将君子谦卑具体化了，尤其是结合汶川地震志愿者的形象，能引起众人共鸣。

Comments: This article is characterized by the second person style in writing, which is easy and cordial. This paper holds the connotation of "gentleman" accurately, especially emphasizes humility, prudence, morality and gentleness, which shows that the author has certain cultural accomplishment. This article repeatedly emphasizes the image of the stooper, which makes the gentleman humble and concrete, especially combining the image of the Wenchuan earthquake volunteers, which can resonate with the public.