此文紧紧围绕“滴水之恩，当涌泉相报”这一论点，先从反面切入，指陈“社会上数不胜数的忘恩负义之人，仇视一切事物之徒，更加深了社会道德危机”；然后援引东西方典型事例与名言警句，由反及正地进行论证，其间“当整个社会呈现出暧昧的姿态时，我们需要一种有质感的态度来面对社会道德危机”起到了很好的过渡作用；最后再次强调有感恩之心是“我们为人处世的准则”，呼应前文，结构严谨。

This article closely revolves around the argument of "the grace of every drop of water, when the spring comes to report to each other", first, it points out that "the countless ungrateful people in the society, who hate all things, deepen the social moral crisis"; then it quotes the typical examples and famous sayings of the East and the west, and demonstrates them from the opposite to the right, in which "when the whole society presents an ambiguous attitude, we We need a kind of qualitative attitude to face the social moral crisis, which has played a good transitional role. Finally, we emphasize once again that the heart of gratitude is the "principle of our life", which echoes the previous article and has a rigorous structure.

综观全篇，现实性、针对性很强，材料丰富，表达严密，不少语句还富含哲理。由此不难看出，这位考生思想境界比较高，对人生有深刻的思考，作文功底也非常扎实。

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