Comments on famous teachers (Yao Shaoqing)
“感谢你们的爱”,但“请轻轻放松你们的双手”,给孩子自由飞翔的空间——作者在文中着力传达自己的心声,发自肺腑,令人感动。拟人手法的巧妙运用,强化了感染力,给读者以亲切感。
"Thank you for your love", but "please gently relax your hands", to give children the space to fly freely - the author tries to convey his voice in the article, heartfelt and touching. The ingenious use of anthropomorphic technique strengthens the appeal and gives readers a cordial feeling.
文章结构精巧,一个总标题下又拟了三个小标题,分别以“风筝”“蝴蝶”和“孩子”的口吻叙述故事,表现同一个主题。这种分列小标题的形式,如鲜花绽放,争奇斗艳,有赏心悦目的美感。
The structure of the article is exquisite. Under a general title, three sub headings are drawn up. They narrate the story in the tone of "Kite", "Butterfly" and "child" respectively, and show the same theme. This kind of form of sub headings, such as flowers blooming, fighting for splendor, has a pleasing aesthetic feeling.
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