I am approve(绝对低级的错误!!!) of the Multi-cultural ,second(这个词怎么放在这里) ,because it will be favorable to the global integrated. as a saying goes survival of the fittest, a multi-cultural social must have the multi-language, multi-lifestyle ,even multi-managing method ,competing would inevitable ,and the most adapt the social developed will be leave behind. The human beings would elaborate the abilities as far as they could, the government will find a best way to administer the society, and to build it more harmoniously.
Opponents of the argue ,the unique heritage, languages and artistic expression will become scattered and lost .Some linguists are fully aware of the loss of languages ,there is not much they can do.
All in all, the fact that multi-cultural society will becoming a global trend in the future ,unquestioned, it must be advanced, but at the same time, while striving to develop the diverse cultures, we also should to protecting the local culture ,to uphold ethnic and cultural identity.
总评:后面几段太多低级错误了,感觉作者越写越没有感觉了,这个说明平时写作练得不够,写到后面就乱写!我把明显错误的地方标了出来,其他其实还有很多错误,就不标了!
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