第四段(结尾)
In conclusion, I believe we must all recognize how serious this problem is.
For the sake of human existence on this planet, it is suggested that joint efforts across the border should be made to rescue the only homeland on which we have survived for millions of years.
第二篇RS(即原因+解决方案的题型)例题2010年1月23日
第一段(开头)
In our time and age, much debate has taken place about social equality. The disparity between the wealthy and the impoverished is being enlarged. In this article, I intend to explore its sources and provide some possible measures.
第二段(分析原因)
本段内容概要:社会资源分配不均,社会保障/福利系统不完善,家庭背景不同
The primary cause of this problem is that social resources are allocated unevenly among citizens. Furthermore, public welfare system fails to cover those disadvantaged groups in reality. Another contributing factor is that individuals income is always determined by their capabilities. Finally, peoples success is also directly related to ones family background.
第三段(解决方案)
本段内容概要:富人应该帮助穷人摆脱贫困,向富人征更多的税,完善社会福利体系/给弱势群体更多的支持,大力推动慈善事业
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