本段的写法是由远及近,从远处写起,然后get closer,再到,最后是 inside the pagoda当然,按位置远近来写不等于都是由远及 近。根据需要,也可以由近及远,由表及里等等。
C. 按逻辑关系排列
a. 按重要性顺序排列
If you work as a soda jerker, you will, of course, not need much skill in expressing yourself to be effective. If you work on a machine, your ability to express yourself will be of little importance. But as soon as you move one step up from the bottom, your effectiveness depends on your ability to reach others through the spoken or the written word. And the further away your job is from manual work, the larger the organization of which you are an employee, the more important it will be that you know how to convey your thoughts in writing or speaking. In the very large business organization, whether it is the government, the large corporation, or the Army, this ability to express oneself is perhaps the most important of all the skills a man can possess.
这一段谈的是表达能力,它的重要性与职业,身份有关,从not need much skill或 of little importance到 more important,最后是 most important。
b.由一般到特殊排列
If a reader is lost, it is generally because the writer has not been careful enough to keep him on the path. This carelessness can take any number of forms. Perhaps a sentence is so exces
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