二、 分析
真题链接:In some countries, government encourages industries and business to move from large cities to regional areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this policy?
以上是作文题库中的考试真题,相信大家都已经非常熟悉了。我们就一起结合此题,对单边结构的整体文章结构和遣词造句做一个简单的对比。
1. 引言段
引言段是通篇作文的开篇之作,对于它的写法多种多样。但是无论怎样书写,切忌出现以下模式性的语句样式:
模板语言:
Nowadays, the relocation of industries and business has become a public focus on which people retain different views. Personally, I am favor of the opinion that we should move the industries and business to regional areas. The reasons can be listed in the following three aspects.
这样的模板相信大部分考生都不会觉得陌生,它曾经造福了无数考生。但是这样过于机械的语言,很难体现出考生对考题文字的理解,更为糟糕的是,你的开头有可能和无数人是重复的!
下面我们就做一个简单的对比:
非模板语言:
In traditional city planning, the industrial and commercial areas are placed in large cities.However, recently, in some countries, government start to encourage those functional areas to move out of cities.The alternation of location for those sections can be viewed as an action to ensure the sustainable development of a country.
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