Between 1940 and 1985 the proportion of the elderly people increased remarkably from about 17% in Sweden and 9% in the USA to 13% and 15% respectively.
2. 年代做主语+saw + increase
The period from 1940 to 1985 saw a generally steadyincrease in the proportion of
3.地点做主语+experienced +increase
Both the USA and Sweden experienced an alarming/moderately surge/increase in the proportion of
写作时首段应是命题的改写
主体段应描写大的特征或大趋势的概括
关键数据即起点终点坐标,最大最小值,偶尔会用交点坐标,部分特征拐点坐标。
雅思小作文得分点:
1. 句子的衔接和句子结构的变化
2. 分词和比较结构的使用
3. 从句的使用
4. 整篇文章万万不可主观推理分析,否则扣分
首段是信息段,不能照抄命题,只能改写命题,概括主要的研究内容,研究对象,时间和地点。如果是两个图,必须分开来写,句型常用while...shows,illustrate
For example:
The three lines in the chart each show the changes in the proportion of the elderly people to the population of the USA, Sweden and Japan from 1940 till today. Also the chart gives predicted date for the trends.
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