雅思写作典型病句分析_雅思英语写作

雅思写作典型病句分析

　　正： Universities should give equal opportunities to those who can contribute in some special areas as well as those who have academic excellence.

　　误：In modern world-level games, we can see that there are many athletes with higher education background. it attribute success to the new education system that the universities have built.

　　higher education background 不好，应改为 good/excellent educational background。

　　attribute 使用错误。见例句：

　　We attribute the success of the party to the excellent organisational ability of the monitor. 我们把晚会的成功举办归功于班长的出色组织能力。

　　The success of the party is attributed to the excellent organisational ability of the monitor.

　　此句的意思与上句一样，只是用了被动形式，主语是某个成功的事情。再如：

　　The improvement of peoples life should be attributed to, among other things, the current economic policy adopted by the central government.

　　人民生活的改善有很多原因，其中之一是由于政府所采取的经济政策。

　　正： In many modern world-level games, there are many athletes with good educational backgrounds. This should be attributed to the new educational system that the universities have built.