误:Even though university accept those students who have special athletic talents that will get some comment, the benefit will outweighted its disadvantages.
定语从句 that will get some comment 有两个问题:1)get comment 不好,应改为 be criticised。2)不太清楚此从句修饰主句中的哪个内容:university,students,还是 talents 一词之前所 有内容。
outweigh是正确拼写,有很多人会因为 weight 的拼写给 outweigh加字母 t。
benefit 与 disadvantages 在数上应对等,或都用单数,或都用复数。
正:Even though some universities accept students who have special athletic talents, which is often criticised, the benefits of doing this outweigh disadvantages.
或:Even though the universities that accept students who have special athletic talents are often criticised, the advantages of doing this outweigh disadvantages.
误:Students who have special athletic talents should not become the scapegoat for lowering the universitys academic standards, they should be entitled to choose the appropriate university they like.
前后两句话之间不能用逗号,或用句号,或用分号。 be entitled to 后应跟名词,如:
Everyone is entitled to education. 人人都有受教育的权利。
I am entitled to an annual vacation of 15 days. 我每年有15天的休假。
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