句中有一个非常不明显的错误,动名词 lowering 的主语问题。见例句:
1)I passed the difficult exam primarily by having worked a lot harder than others.
我通过了这个困难的考生,主要是靠比别人更努力地工作。
2)Tom went to Edinburgh by hitch-hiking. 汤姆考搭顺风车去了爱丁堡。
在这两个例句中,动名词 having 和 hitch-hiking 的主语就是句子的主语。而在 Those students 句中,lowering academic standards 的主语不是学生自己,而是学校。 虽然这个错误不明显,却是个严重的错误。
always 的位置不好。
正:Those students who enrol by being given lower academic standards cant always finish their academic courses well.
或: Those students who enrol for their athletic excellence rather than for their academic performance often have difficulties finishing their academic courses well.
误:Some of these students couldnt graduate timely as a result of bad exams marks.
timely:及时的,适时的。此句中应用按时、准时,最好的词组是 on time。
bad exams marks 不好,可用 poor academic performance。
正: Some of these students couldnt graduate on time as a result of poor academic performance.
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