The war on Iraq which broke out early this year witnessed the controversial roles woman soldiers played in a modern war. Yet, while some countries encourage women to wear military uniforms, others discourage this vulnerable sex from becoming armed monsters. To be frank, I am a traditional man who always associates women with feeding bottles, needles and cooking utensils while men with swords and gunpowder.
这段话没有什么难词,其实同学们都可以写出来,关键是要有一个选词的意识,有一个修辞的意识。利弊型的大作文,同学们最爱写Every coin has two sides来过渡。说实话,看到这样的句子,我现在浑身都起鸡皮疙瘩。用的人多了,也就烂了。能不能写Even the sun has its dark side,或者Even Achillesheel has his weak point ?换个角度,因为大家写作,都是在翻译我们的汉语思想,那么当我们想说一个女孩的眼睛水汪汪的,英语能不能想到juicy eyes ?汉语说味同嚼蜡,英语说as dry as sawdust, 我们能不能说as dry as a desert?文章贵在创新。这就需要大家平时多阅读,多观察,多思考。比如我们经常会看到门,但一个高中生能写出门其实也是墙,只是比墙多了一扇希望这样的诗句。雅思写作的最高境界是心中有模板,下笔无模板。就好像我们都是戴着镣铐生活的舞者,等到有一天我们舞到忘记了它们的存在,我们就舞出了人生的最高境界。
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