冗长:We were driving out into the country, and we met our first English teacher riding in a bus, and the bus was crowded.
简练:As we were driving out into the country, we met our first English teacher riding in a crowded bus.
4、避免过多地使用从属句
英语中比较重要的从属概念可用从句的形式来表达,其他次要的概念则多用词或短语来表达,因为句子比短语显得更重要。过多地使用从句会把次要的与主要的概念混为一谈,从而削弱句子重点。纠正过多的从属结构,可以采用把从句改成修饰语、同位语或简单句等形式。例:
冗长:He is a man who is honest and who never tells lies.
简练:He is an honest man, who never tells lies.
5、避免过多使用碎句
碎句就是短句。书面表达中过多使用碎句,会破坏信息的连贯性,使表达的内容显得罗嗦、拖沓。通常通过使用同位结构、非谓语动词、介词短语、独立主格结构、复合句等形式可将碎句巧妙地合并在一起。例:
碎句:It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining and a breeze(微风)is blowing.
精练:It is a beautiful day with the sun shining and a breeze blowing.
碎句:Carl went to the airport. He wanted to see Mrs Black off.
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