1. 词数100左右。
2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。
3. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
4. 参考栏目:栏目column
Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.
Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, culture express gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, its necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, blurt out is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, entertainment is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely cant miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.
Well, I cant list more. I really cant wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现,导致了安徽省今年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章,写的的确是好,很地道的美式英语,一些词语的大胆使用,让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历,否则这么地道标准的英语,可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。
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