2.Maybe there are also some disadvantages of living in a city,but I think they are less important.I feel convenient and comfortable.
析:句子后半部分的逻辑关系未交代清楚,令人有前言不搭后语的感觉。可以改为:Theere are surely disadvantages of living in a city,too,but they are less important and tend to be de-emphasized.For the sake of the advantages mentioned above,I prefer to live in a city.
3.Different people have different choices.Some people like living in a city and some people like living in a village.
析:Choice的含义十分宽泛,因此与后面的like不相称,应改为:Different people have different likes and dislikes.Some like to live in a city,others like to live in a village.
4.The people,the society and so on were quite different from now.
析:The people,the society依然不足以让读者完全理解要论述的话题,可改为:The peopIe,the society and other aspects of life were quite different from now.
5.Thieves should be sentenced for what they have done.
析:使用sentence未免言过其实,应改为:Thieves should be punished for their wrongdoing.
(三)简洁洗练,要言不烦
语言简洁有力,文风干净利落,是议论文的重要特征之一。应该指出的是,好句子并不以长短论英雄,长句未必不简洁,短句未必不哆咳。作者在写作时,只要力求做到章无冗段,段无冗句,句无冗词,就可改变当断不断、拖泥带水的现象。
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