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　　1.This is a good strong statement about the dilemma of being a part of two different cultures. The theme is backed by excellent examples of the conflict and the writing is clear, clean, and crisp. The essay then concludes with a compelling summary of the dilemma and the challenge it presents to the student.

　　2.A masterful job of explaining the conflict of being a child of two cultures. The writer feels strongly about the burden of being a first generation American, but struggles to understand her parents perspective. Ultimately she confesses implicitly that she cannot understand them and faces her own future. The language is particularly impressive:It smacked of the bohemian, subtly unChinese, and a fading Chinese heritage. That she is not kinder to her parents does not make her unkind, just determined.

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