再如,在以Chinese Women 为题的这篇段首句作文中,第一段的核心词是liberated in many aspects。因此,第一段应着重阐述中国妇女在哪些方面已获得了解放。第二段段首句的过渡词However,表示意思转折,与第一段内容形成对立关系,要求写妇女没有获得解放的方面。展开主题时,应注重事例要典型、突出。第三段给出的句子位于段尾,可视为结论句。其中more一词表示妇女现在的状况良好,将来会更好。该段的续写要简明扼要地指明妇女目前良好的总体状况,以便和最后一句自然衔接。请看范文:
Chinese Women
⑴Women in China have been liberated in many aspects. ⑵They enjoy the right to vote; they go to universities; they compete with men in any professional field on equal terms. ⑶They have shown that they are capable of being good leaders and of doing many important things. ⑷Practically, they are holding up half the sky.⑸However, there still exist some problems. ⑹Some people think women cannot hold many important posts as men do. ⑺For example, the female college students are often refused to enter into some professions where the male students have the priority. ⑻Besides, women are still treated as the inferior sex in some rural areas. ⑼Their only position is considered to raise children and do household chores.⑽Generally, with the rapid development of our economy, women have made enormous strides in their social status; they get equal position as men do. ⑾In the future, we can expect a more promising prospect for Chinese women. ⑴主题句⑵⑶举例说明妇女在哪些方面获得解放⑷结尾句/小结⑸主题句/指出还存在问题⑹问题一⑺举例证明问题一⑻问题二⑼具体论证问题二⑽总结妇女目前良好的总体状况⑾展望中国妇女未来的状况
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