12) When it comes to the problem of eating wild animals

　　13) As far as family planning is concerned, there is much room for improvement.

　　14) All these statistics reveal a painful fact that corruption is spreading rapidly in our country

　　15) Without love, my classmate Xiao Wang would have died in the hospital. But with our love and care, he survived the illness and can enjoy his life now.

　　16) Without computers , it would be difficult to imagine modern life.

　　17) It is imperative for us to take effective measures to correct the situation

　　18) The participating Slogan should be an embodiment of the concept of Green Olympics, Hi-Tech Olympics and Peoples Olympics with Peoples Olympics as its highlight and should reflect the unique cultural background and humanism of China and Beijing.

　　19) Let us work hand in hand to solve this problem

　　20) We should do our best in eliminating industrial pollution

　　六.Post-writing:

　　第一步集中在语法上：

　　1) 每个句子是否都有谓语动词;

　　2) 动词的时态和语态;

　　3) 主谓搭配是否恰当;

　　4) 代词与其指代的事物是否一致;

　　5) 标点符号。

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