⑦ Jin is a disabled athlete from Shanghai.
⑧ When she was nine years old, she lost one leg because of her illness.
⑨ Jin Jing does not lose her joy for life after losing her leg.
⑩ Her loveliness and optimism are infectious to everyone around her wherever she is.
【教师点评】
作者抓住了反映金晶无畏精神的事件进行了详细的描写,整个事件的发生、过程、结果都交代的条理、清楚。叙述时短语(下划线)起了很好的衬托作用,选词得当。另外,句型(斜体)和连接词(黑体)也在文中起了烘托作用。尽管是介绍人物,但将整个事件准确地描述出来也需要作者具有一定的写作基础。总之,该习作达到了写作目的。
【句型拓展】
beyond.
9. Her fearlessness was infectious and touched the heart of the entire nation
10. Out of instinct, I clung to the torch and held it close to my body until a few French policemen came to my rescue.
11. The citizens of Paris were touched by Jin Jing and they applauded her as she finished her leg.
12. There are still four months to go before the first gold medal is decided at the Beijing Games, but China is already celebrating its first Olympic hero - a wheelchair-bound amputee who defended the flame in extraordinary circumstances.
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