当然了,这些非言语类的对话标识本身也像“said”这词一样的老。查你的字典看看,你会发现,这些对话动词比如,crow,啼叫,yell叫喊,whisper低语,和groan咆哮虽都是当代的言语词,但在古英语和现代英语中都有着广泛的应用。
4.Omit Needless Words
4。删掉多余的单词
Along with advice about the passive voice and keeping your writing in the same verb tense is this often-quoted axiom: omit needless words。
和在写作中对被动语态的建议及要保持时态一致一样被经常引用的还有:删掉多余的单词。
The question is, of course, what’s a needless word and who gets to say? Take this paragraph:
那么问题就是,什么叫多余的单词,谁说了算?我们拿下面这段来举例:
Sitting beside the road, watching the wagon mount the hill toward her, Lena thinks, “I have come from Alabama: a fur piece。 All the way from Alabama a-walking。 A fur piece。” Thinking although I have not been quite a month on the road I am already in Mississippi, further from home than I have ever been before。 I am now further from Doane’s Mill than I have been since I was twelve years old。
坐在路边,看着货车爬上了她这边的山丘,莉娜心想,“我来自于阿拉巴马这么一个皮毛之地。阿拉巴马所有的路都必须得步行。一个皮毛之地啊。”尽管我离家还不到一个月,我已经到了密西西比,比我以前任何时候都离家远。这比我12岁那年离多恩的磨房要更远了。
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