⑤fish作“鱼肉讲时是不可数名词,作“鱼讲时是可数名词,只是单复数一样,fishes表达的意思是“不同种类的鱼。故本题fishes要改为fish。
【习作题目二】
假如你是Alicia">Alicia,你的朋友Maria邀请你本周内和她一起去爬山,但周一到周五你都有事情,你的妈妈刚刚生病住院了,本周末还要照顾妈妈。请你给Maria写一封e-mail,说明你不能去爬山了,并陈述一下具体的原因。70—80词左右。
【学生习作】
Hi Maria,
Thank you for your invitation. I’m sorry I can’t go climbing with you. I ①real have a busy week. From Monday to Friday I have to study at school. I have to play my piano after school. So I don’t have any time to do ②else something. My mother is ill ③in the hospital. ④On weekends I’ll take care of my ⑤ill mother. Could I hear from you soon? Give my best wishes to your family.
Alicia
【老师点评】小作者能够全面根据所给的信息,安排合理,语句流畅,结构严谨,符合电子邮件的写作要求,但在词汇用法上有些错误,希望以后多多练笔。
①real是形容词,其副词 really修饰动词或形容词,放在形容词或动词前面。故real要改为really。
②else 意为“别的、其它的,修饰不定代词要后置。故else something要改为something else。
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