Our school has regular rest hours for students.
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Don’t Stay Up Late
Our school has regular rest hours for students.However,we can often see many students do their lessons or other things after the bed time.They usually stay up until midnight.
Teenagers need enough sleep daily.Staying up late may do harm to health.It can also make students late for class or sleepy in class.Thus,they miss something they should have learned.
It is blameless to stay up once in a while if we do have to take up our rest time for some urgent deeds,but don’t make it a habit.President Xi recently advised young people not to stay up late,which we should bear in mind.Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy,wealthy and wise.We really need to make a change to the unhealthy lifestyle so as to ensure our rest time.
【精彩点评】本文是提纲类作文,要求学生就“不要熬夜”的建议写一篇短文,故应用一般现在时和第一人称。该文章全面叙述了班级中同学们熬夜的现象和造成的结果以及不要熬夜的原因与建议。文章要点全,语法知识应用灵活,且使用得当。文中使用了省略to的不定式做see的宾语补足语,until引导的时间状语从句,if引导的状语从句,staying up做主语;不定式做真正的主语;which引导的非限制性定语从句;高级词汇或短语make a change,bear,ensure等;thus和but等的应用等都彰显了作者扎实的英语功底。
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