What is to be praised is the life interest shown in this article. The 17-8-year-old is not as good as the 7-8-year-old, who dare not face the "pit stone"; the trees "laugh" at me, but I want to "laugh" at the fallen leaves "this guy"; the trees "laugh" at me, but they want to relieve the ants' troubles, but they also want to have "magic thoughts"; after getting the feeling, they quickly run back to the "pit is still a pit, and the stone is still a stone", jump up high and fall gently, regardless of whether they will step on the mud or not, Splash your clothes; through the sunshine in the tree gap, the bright and swaying breeze The delicate and vivid description and humorous language make the article full of life interest and make the readers full of joy while getting enlightenment.
文章在用词上还可严谨些。如,“怎奈年越长,幼时之勇反愈小”一句,前面的“越”应改为“愈”,与后一个“愈”相一致;“初生之牛不畏虎”应是“初生牛犊不怕虎”。
The article can be more precise in terms of words. For example, "the longer the age is, the smaller the courage is when you are young", the former "the more" should be changed to "the more", which is consistent with the latter "the more"; the "the first born cow is not afraid of tigers" should be "the first born calf is not afraid of tigers".
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