Confucius is called "sage" because of his unchanging sentiment, his pursuit of "Great Harmony" and "restoration of Rites", and his modest and correct attitude towards life. We didn't learn his rites, his soul. We can only be busy with this life. The rules, the character and the principle are ignored, so they are submerged in the vast sea of people.
穿越千古的尘埃,在古人的心中,寻找那一方净土。虽身处尘世,但那“繁复”的礼节却给浮生以宁静,予心灵以平和,赋人生以感悟。
Through the dust of the ages, in the hearts of the ancients, looking for the pure land. Although living in the world, but the "complicated" etiquette gives floating life peace, peace to the soul, and life to understand.
不知礼者,也枉来人世了。无束缚不成器,无规矩不成方圆。这不仅适用于古代,亦适用于现代。
Those who don't know how to be polite have come to the world in vain. No bondage, no implement, no rules, no square. This applies not only to ancient times, but also to modern times.
今生有礼今世好,莫笑尼山说旧辞。
This life is polite and this life is good. Don't laugh at Nishan's old words.
【评语】开篇简洁的题记让人眼前一亮,乍一看有些不明所以。然而慢慢看下来,才不得不为作者缜密的思维感叹。首先引出了材料中的孔子,更是深刻的提出了一个问题“是他要求过高,还是身体太娇贵?”其实后面的文段便是对这个问题最好的回答。从行云流水的文笔中,我们似乎看见了一个奋笔疾书、面带会心微笑的学子——不再是简单的考生,而是我笔诉我心的读书人。而最后从“读书”又联系到了生活,看到“现代人生活的节奏”,更加体现了作者思想的深度。最后三段收尾,可以说是文章的经典所在,不仅涵括了前文的内容,而且起到了卒章显志之效,末尾一句诗也巧妙地照应了题记。(常红艳)
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