[comments] the simple opening of the inscription is very bright. At first glance, it seems that it is not clear why. But slowly, I have to sigh for the author's meticulous thinking. First of all, it leads to Confucius in the materials, but also profoundly raises a question: "is he too demanding or too delicate?" In fact, the following passage is the best answer to this question. From the flowing writing, we seem to see a student who works hard and writes with a smile on his face - no longer a simple examinee, but a reader who tells me my heart. At last, from reading to life, we can see the rhythm of modern people's life, which embodies the depth of the author's thoughts. The conclusion of the last three paragraphs can be said to be the classic of the article, which not only includes the content of the previous article, but also plays an important role in the performance of the chapter, and the poem at the end also cleverly follows the inscription. (Chang Hongyan)
严谨是一种明悟
Preciseness is a kind of understanding
准考证号:042006045
Examination Permit No.: 042006045
陈梦琪
Chen Meng Qi
每一只精致完美的蜂巢都是由数以万计的蜂儿在认真严谨的态度下完成。
Every delicate and perfect hive is completed by tens of thousands of bees in a serious and rigorous manner.
每一只伶俐的海豚都带着与生俱来的精细“声纳”在碧海汪洋中遨游。
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