From this point of view, preciseness is the way to success for dream chasers.
瑞士、日本与中国、印度、加拿大相比,不过是指甲壳上的区区小国,却依仗着精细的仪器制作与一丝不苟的治国理念驰名世界。严谨使他们贫瘠的国土上盛开出文明灿烂之花。
Compared with China, India and Canada, Switzerland and Japan are just small countries on the carapace, but they are well-known in the world by virtue of their sophisticated instrument production and meticulous concept of governance. Preciseness makes their barren land full of flowers of civilization and brilliance.
由此看来来,严谨是国家的兴旺之道。
From this point of view, preciseness is the way of national prosperity.
严谨是一种明悟,无论体现在动物还是人,个体还是国家,它都是一条散发出智慧芳香的箴言。
Preciseness is a kind of understanding. No matter in animals or people, individuals or countries, it is a motto that emits the fragrance of wisdom.
【点评】这是一篇由此及彼,引发联想的典范之作,作者从“食不厌精,脍不厌细。”中提炼出“严谨”的观点,以“动物生存之道”开篇,接着以“治学之人的修身之道”、“追梦之人的成功之道”、“国家的兴旺之道”来表述自己对“严谨”的思考与联想,由小及大,由个体到群体,由现象到抽象,逻辑严密、条理清晰,且论证中旁征博引、事实充分很有说服力,显示作者丰厚的文化知识积累与娴熟的思维能力。(蒋葵林)
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