Another factor we cannot neglect is that some pets are indipensible under special circumstances. Take, as an example, a guide-dog. It can not only be a loyal companion to the blind but also assist them in crossing the road. An excellent guide-dog is, if not better than, as good as the eyes of the blind in that it lets the owner feel loved and relieved.
自我点评:写的时候感觉内容很难写,这可能也是同学们会遇到的问题。所以平时即使懒得写作文,至少也 要对找些题目来构思一下(brainstorming),免得考试的时候由于构思太长而来不及答题!!!
Also, it is sagacious to general citizens can get mental satisfaction from pets.That is to say,it is a striking fact that every amenity city for a citizen boasts not only of its advanced establishment but also of its mental satisfaction.And this just can shows that our city is a fit place for heroes to live in.
点评:1+2的模式,这种模式我说过是高手用的。因为,句数那么少就必须运用长句来弥补词数的不足。而且语法功底不好的人,一写长句不仅会犯错,而且严重的时候会导致句子本身根本无法理解!!!所以,要量力而行啊!!!(不是牛牛的学生,就不要打肿脸冒充牛!!!呵呵)
语言方面:第1句印象极差!!!犯了如此严重的错误,最多5分了(一个句子竟然有两个谓语动词!!!)。以下是改写的段落:
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