淡化雅思文章模板痕迹：单边结构写作_雅思英语写作

淡化雅思文章模板痕迹：单边结构写作

　　2. 主体段

　　模板语言：

　　In the first place, ____________________________.

　　In the second place, _________________________.

　　Last but not the least, _________________________.

　　在传统的模板里，单边结构的主体段只是简单的分段论证分论点，虽然结构一目了然，但是也难免落入模式化的俗套。

　　做一个简单的对比：

　　非模板语言：

　　a. 让步分析

　　Admittedly, when industry and commercial regions are established in large cities, the profits of enterprises could be maximized. Due to the sufficient human resource, advanced technology and complete infrastructure, urban areas are always regarded as a dream land for economic development. Apart from the positive effects the location exerts on the development of companies, the contribution of taxes to the government is another reason why those industries are originally built in cities.

　　单边结构并不总是一条道走到黑，可以先让步分析题目中的背景信息，这样可以为观点的论证提供很好的铺垫，当提出观点的时候就不会很突兀，会显得更加底气十足。

　　b. 转折过渡

　　However, nothing is without its costs. The flourishment of economy also brings a more crowded environment, soaring crime rate and the heavy burden of resources in cities, which arouses a dramatic conflict between different fields. Whats more, it leads to the unbalanced regional development. And the gap between cities and rural areas is continuously sharpened.