A accounts for the same percentage as B .
The proportion of A is as high as B
A and B contributed equally/evenly to
Task 2 :Nowadays more and more work can be done by machines instead of hands. Do you think its positive impact on the development outweighs its negative impact on individuals or society?
该文属于雅思写作18大领域中的科技类,该类的文章在雅思写作中的考察主要集中于现代科技(如这里的机械化大生产)对人们生活方式所产生的影响,具体体现在3个方面:
1. 科技的发展的影响是正面的还是负面(如2006.1.14);
2. 科技发展使我们的闲暇时间变得更多还是更少(如2005.2.19);
3. 科技发展对我们的文化、思想、观念和社区有什么影响(如2007.3.31)。
写作示范
本文属于第1点和第3点的组合型题目,典型的report 类题型,利用黄金对称式写法全文分四段展开。
首段交代背景,提出写作目的,共③句话。
①It is an indisputable fact that machinery poses a significant effect on modern society, either on an individual or social level.
语言点评:注意句型it is an indisputable fact that 短语:pose a significant effect on 和individual or social level.
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