结尾段:总结全文,重申论点,共②句话。
To conclude, modern machinery brings both positive and negative effect on peoples living. However, as sensible individuals in this society, we need to harness the great convenience it brings and try to minimize the potential risks arising from this process.
语言点评:对于科技类的文章,科技为双刃剑的结论虽然被奉为圭臬但是考生完全可以用不同的语言来表达这一结论, harness the great convenience it brings and try to minimize the potential risks arising from this process. 远远要比:Technology is a double edged sword 或者是Every coin has two sides这样的语言要好很多。
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