SAT写作分低怎么办？实例讲解SAT作文差在哪儿_SAT写作

SAT写作分低怎么办？实例讲解SAT作文差在哪儿

　　语言修改

　　Teaching and learning promote each other is a famous saying by Confucius, the greatest educator and philosopher in China. This proverb demonstrates that teaching not only helps others master a subject but benefit the teacher himself. For instance, during the Spring and Autumn period, Confucius had numerous students. While teaching, his students raised many questions which made Confucius rethink them carefully. After he was able to consider them utterly, he told his students how to think of the problems. Confucius probably benefited a lot from these questions and wrote down his thoughts in his book.

　　本段评点

　　这一段举孔子的例子立意很好，但是最后一句话有逻辑问题. 孔子的学生问了很多问题，促使他再三思考。于是他就学到很多东西。以上的两句话有点逻辑问题。其实，不能从学生问了很多问题就得出结论说孔子学了很多东西。更合理的写法是：孔子的学生问了很多问题，而他本人也往往是通过回答这些问题来阐述自己的思想。也许，孔子作为老师也得益于这些问题，因为学生的问题促使他再三思考。这可能是他说出教学相长的原因。还有一个知识性的问题, 孔子并没有把他和学生的问答写进书里, 他的思想都是他的学生和后人记录的。

　　学生习作

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