这节课学生写作任务完成的很顺利,在规定时间里基本完成了布置给他们的任务。在批改的过程中,我觉得他们作文写得出乎我的意料。现摘录下来供大家分析。
高三(1) 王琎
June
June is a special month to me, because I was born in June. I have a special feeling about June. Also, June in 2010 will be a meaningful month for me, because of the approaching of the National Entrance Examination.
As is known to all, the National Entrance Examination is very important for us students. After the exam, not only will I be liberated, but also I will be an adult. As with many adults, I will have many responsibilities. I should be responsible for my behaviours. I can’t do the things that I want to .
In order to be responsible for my family, I am supposed to have a good job. So it is necessary for me to study some skills. Then I will study in a university and major in what I am interested in. During the time in the university, I will work hard and do many extra materials so that I will be good at the skills. After I master the skills, I will step into society and make contributions to our country and my family members.
I believe that the National Entrance Examination will determine my fate, so I will be buried in my study and work hard.
我批阅他的作文的时候,给他指出了当中的一些小错误,对他的作文评价是:行文流畅、所学知识使用合理、书写急待提高。
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