June is coming. Let’s make preparations for it. We are supposed to check all the knowledge that we studied. If we devote our hearts and time to our study, we can gain all the happiness in the end.
给他的评语是:文章基本流畅,运用了所学的熟悉的知识来表达自己的思想,段落层次还不够分明,有一些小错误要尽力避免。
Teachers say that June is equal to our fates. For the National Entrance Examination is approaching, we should work harder. Do you find that your classmates are buried in their books after class, and also they do many extra materials. So the month is full of competition. What’s more, after June we will be thoroughly liberated, we can do whatever we like. Then you will set foot on the university, majoring in what you are interested in. On the other hand, you should master modern technology so that you can find a better job to support your family. As we are grown-ups, it can’t be denied that we should be responsible for our deeds.
Over the past few years, we have studied a lot. Just work harder and you will succeed. Best wishes for you to live your dream in June.
给她的评语是:书写美观整洁、文章基本上能够达意、在思想性和连贯性方面还需要努力。
June is a month which is filled with joy, but the next June will decide our fate, because we will have the National Entrance Examination.
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