June is hot but relaxing. The National Entrance Examination is approaching and we are facing the fate.
In order to be admitted to a good university, we need to do a lot of things. We need to go over our knowledge; we need to go gain the feeling of the exam , and most of all, we should try to control our minds so that we calm ourselves down to do the examination.
After the examination, we will be free. Anything that wouldn’t be allowed before will be fine, playing day after day, even we can make our own girlfriends. As far as I’m concerned, though I don’t believe in love, I also want to make a friend and treat her as a girlfriend. Love is hard, but is dependent on you.
University is a place for further study. Learning useful skills , developing the wisdom, strengthening the body, only by relying on yourself, will you expend your area in heart.
Take on your duty, love your classmates and teachers, and show your kindness like the sunshine in June.
June must be a month with endless experiences. May it be a turning point in your fate, during which you will grow up.
Set foot on your future, I long to see what will happen, and what I will get.
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Everyone has a lot of imaginations about June. June is a season full of different mood. Students may feel nervous in June because they will take the National Entrance Examination. The examination will certainly decide their fates. If a student achieve a success, he may feel excited and relaxed. NMET is a fierce competition. Every student should try his best to prepare for the examination. After the NMET, it means that we are frown-ups, and then we will have to make contributions to the society and our parents. Before this, we should master some skills so that we can survive in the world. So, we should make the hot June more wonderful so that we can make our life more wonderful.
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