2017届高考英语一轮复习全套课件：第3部分写作指导提分策略7 龙头凤尾（北师大版）_高考复习指南

2017届高考英语一轮复习全套课件：第3部分写作指导提分策略7 龙头凤尾（北师大版）

　　【思路点拨】该试题要求考生写一篇英文周记,其实也是写一篇记叙文,叙述祖父母去北戴河旅行的准备过程。题目的呈现方式为四幅图片。第一幅图是事前准备,三个问号涉及要写出的三个方面,这属于关键的得分点,千万不能遗漏。第二幅图和第三幅图都是准备的过程,前三幅图的图画内容没有所谓的轻重之分,因此在写作的时候,要注意三幅图的比重要基本一致,不要出现一个图一句话带过,而其他图画重点描写的情况。最后一幅图,是故事的结尾。文章开头可采用主题句,如:Last weekend,I helped my grandparents organize their trip to Beidaihe;结尾句可谈谈自己的感想和愿望,如:Waving goodbye to them on the platform,I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.

　　(2016·山东日照第一中学期中考试)假设你是李华,准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按要求写一篇短文,主要内容包括: 1.乐观的人生态度; 2.努力学习; 3.参加体育锻炼。注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 We all want to grow up happily and healthily,and for this goal we must do several things.

　　【参考范文】 We all want to grow up happily and healthily,and for this goal we must do several things. Firstly,we should develop a good attitude to life.Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times.We should be brave in face of difficulties.Secondly,we must study hard because knowledge is power.If we have the power,we can help to build our country and enjoy life better.In order to study well,we need to do sports so that we can keep fit.We can go running,play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study.If we do those things well,we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.