3,” 逐渐投入创作境界“即”逐渐进入创作的最佳状态“,译为gradually move into the best state of readiness for creative writing. the best state of readiness意为”最佳的准备状态“。
4,” 室内四壁都伸手可及,我在墙壁上…”中前一句的主语“墙壁”在后一句中作状语,宜进行合译,将“室内四壁都伸手可及”译为“在伸手可及的墙壁上”
5,“词海语林偶得的一鳞半爪“即”可供学习参考的只言片语“译为some linguistic gems,也可以译为some useful words and expressions
综述:再次回顾了合译~
我很想念那间小书房。有几次偕孩子们路过其地,孩子们如今都到了中年,每次我总要指点方位,告诉他们,那几乎不复可辨的三层楼上,过去是我们一家住过的地方。昨日偶经该处,发现旧屋原址上屹立着耸天高楼,旧居了无痕迹。我在夜色中频频回首仰望,怅然重温我的那个书房旧梦。
How I cherish the memory of the small study! Whenever I passed by the former residence with my children, who have now reached middle age, I never failed to show them the location of our old home and tell them that the third floor of the building which had changed beyond recognition had once been our home. Yesterday, when passing by the same place, I found that the old building was nowhere to be found and that a high-rise had been erected on its site. In the deepening dusk, I repeatedly turned round to look up at the towering structure and wistfully relived the old days I had spent in the small study.
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